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You're my girl

Title: You're my girl
Author: onthethruway01
Length: one shot
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Yoosu, Suchun
Summary: Junsu gets a sex lesson from Yoochun he'll never forget



 Junsu was nervous.  He had been dating this girl for a few months  now and she was starting to get overly affectionate.  Now for any normal guy this would be great.  But Junsu had a dilemna.  He was a religious person.  He was a good guy.  He was still innocent.  Despite the growing image of a masculine young man,  Junsu was  unsure what to do.  These sort of things were not discussed at church on a Sunday.  So Junsu had a problem and it needed to be fixed.  But who do you go to for advice on dating?  Junsu was lucky.  He was a part of the  most popular boy band in Asia.  His hyungs surely had experience with girls.  Even Changmin (who admitted to watching porn) probably would know what to do.  But which one of his band mates should he ask?  The decision was simple.  The one man who seemed to know everything.  Yoochun.

"Hyung," Junsu called out to Yoochun,  "Can I talk to you?"

Junsu stepped into Yoochun's room and closed the door.

Yoochun looked up at Junsu who was visibly nervous.

"What's wrong, Su?  Are you ok?"

Junsu shook  his head.  He sat down on Yoochun's bed.

"I've got a problem, hyung.  I need to ask you some questions."

Yoochun raised an eyebrow.  He sat next to Junsu on the bed.

"Go ahead Su.  You can ask me anything."

Junsu sighed deeply.  He decided he would just get to the point.

"My girlfriend is getting really touchy feely with me and I don't know what to do."

Yoochun stared at Junsu in disbelief.

"So, what's the problem?"

Junsu swallowed hard. 

"Well, I  um, it's just.."

"Su, are you still a virgin?"

"Oh, Shit,"  Junsu blurted out.

"Su, "  Yoochun shook his head.  "We need to get you laid!

Junsu blushed.

"Yeah, but, what about my girlfriend?"

Yoochun started to laugh. 

"Don't worry Su," he said.  "Everything will be fine."

Yoochun went to the door and locked it.  Junsu was confused.  What is Yoochun doing?

"Su, we are going to practice," Yoochun said.

"Practice what, hyung?"

Yoochun had an evil smirk on his face.

"Fucking, Su.  We are going to practice fucking."

Junsu gasped.

"What?"  He looked at his hyung in disbelief.

"I'm glad you came to me Su.  You made the right decision.  Just relax.  I'm going to get you straightened out."

Junsu watched as his hyung began to undress himself down to his boxers.  Su stared at Yoochun's slender body.  He seemed so delicate, like a girl...

"Holy shit," Junsu panicked realizing what Yoochun was attempting to do.

"Relax Su.  Just pretend.  I'm your girl....I'm your girl..."


Yoochun sat down next to Su  and began to undress him.

"Hyung, this isn't what I had in mind."

"It's ok, Su, this is exactly what I had in mind."

Junsu's heart skipped a beat as Yoochun unbuttoned his shirt.   His hyung's slim fingers gracefully caressed Junsu's chest. 

"I'm your girl," Yoochun breathed into Junsu's ear.  The older man brushed his mouth  across Su's inviting lips.  Slowly,  gingerly,  Yoochun's tongue slipped  inside Junsu's mouth.  Junsu gasped.  It was warm,  it was wet, it was....good....

The older man's hands caressed his body as he continued to kiss Junsu full on the mouth.  Yoochun's tongue feverishly darted in and out of Su's mouth, eliciting a muffled cry from him.  His hyung abruptly released him from the kiss, and began to kiss his neck, his chest, his belly, his....

"Hyung please,"    Junsu begged Yoochun.

"No," Yoochun corrected him.  "I'm not your hyung.  I'm your girl..."

Yoochun unbuttoned Junsu's pants and pulled his zipper down.  Junsu sucked in his breath as Yoochun's gracefull  hands took  hold of his cock. 

"Oh my God,"  Junsu thought to himself.  I'm going to burn in Hell for this......"

Yoochun delicately stroked Junsu's cock until it was hard.

"You're my girl," Su moaned.  "You're my girl."

Yoochun took Su's cock full in his mouth.

"Jesus Christ," Junsu gasped.

"Keep breathing," he said to himself, keep breathing..  You are my girl, you are my girl..."

Yoochun was killing him.  But it felt good.  Wrong, but good.  Yoochun sucked relentlessly and hard on Su's  cock.  But he didn't want Su to come that way.  No, Su was going to experience all the pleasure that Yoochun could give him. 
Yoochun stopped sucking Su's cock and wiped his mouth.

"Was that good, Su" he asked?

Su nodded.  He was tempted to say "hyung," but kept his mouth shut.

"Now Su," Yoochun smiled.  "Now you get to fuck me."

Junsu's lower lip trembled.  This was not going to be easy.

Yoochun took off his boxers.  His cock was hard as a rock.  But Yoochun wasn't looking for a blow job.  He was looking to get fucked up the ass.  And Su was going to do it.

Yoochun got on his hands and knees for Junsu.  The poor kid was so scared.  He didn't know what to do.

"I'm your girl, Su"  Yoochun breathed.  "Fuck me.  Fuck your girl."

Junsu was trembling.  Was it from fear or something else?  He found himself compelled to touch Yoochun's  body.  His hands  massaged Yoochun's shoulders and back.  His fingers traced down the line of Yoochun's spine  and meandered over the tattoo on the small of his back. 

"Do it," Yoochun hissed at him.  "Fuck my pussy Su, do it."

Junsu grabbed a hold of Yoochun's hips and thrust his cock deep inside of Yoochun.  Yoochun passionately cried out his name.
"Oh yes Su, fuck me, fuck me.  I'm your girl, I'm your girl."

Junsu found his rhythm, and continued to push his swollen cock inside of Yoochun's ass.  It was so tight...so tight....

Yoochun began to moan in pleasure, forcing Su to pound him harder and faster.

"That's right, baby,"  Yoochun groaned in pleasure. "You fuck me so good Su."

Junsu was losing his mind.  It felt so right and so wrong at the same time.
Yoochun was writhing in pleasure, crying out Su's name, groaning, grunting, growling like an animal.  It was too much for him to take.  He was going to explode.  Yoochun screamed at him.

"Slap my ass Su, Slap my ass."

Junsu smacked Yoochun hard on his ass leaving a mark.  It made Yoochun cry out even louder.

"Yes!" he screamed.  "Oh God, yes.." 

Yoochun could sense Junsu's impending orgasm and readied himself. 

"I'm going to come Su," Yoochun gasped.  "I'm going to come."

It was too much for Junsu to take.  He came in one great burst deep inside of Yoochun.

Yoochun grabbed his own throbbing cock and pumped it hard, his cum shooting out everywhere.

Junsu was breathless.  He collapsed on the bed next to Yoochun.  His hyung was drenched with sweat and cum, but he didn't seem to care.  He looked over at Junsu. 

"Are you ok,  Su?"

Su wasn't sure how he felt. 

"Was that good for you?  It was good for me, Su"

Yoochun winked at Junsu. 

"Hyung," he said, but Yoochun placed a finger on Junsu's lips.

"Shh, I'm your girl, remember?"

"But, aren't we done yet?"

"Nope, now we cuddle."

"What?"

Yoochun wrapped his arms and legs around Junsu.  Yoochun nodded in encouragment and Su returned the affection.

Yoochun kissed Su sweetly on the cheek.

"I love you Junsu," Yoochun sighed.

"I love you too," Su answered.  "You are my girl....."


















 

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( 42 comments — Leave a comment )
predatorkitten
Mar. 17th, 2009 08:49 pm (UTC)
"....and when Junsu tells Junho about how his hyung helped him.....Junho breaks Yoochun in half....or DOES he?!" lmao

you are really crankin' out the tales there missy....did something in particular inspire you?

this was fun as always XD
onthethruway01
Mar. 17th, 2009 08:59 pm (UTC)
I don't know what brings on my evil genius...must be the Pimp.

I've always enjoyed writing. I was a writer and editor at my college newspaper.

I'm going to have to really think about the Hochun relationship....not quite sure what I'm going to do about those two.

Heading home now. Thanks for reading and for the encouragement...tata!
onthethruway01
Mar. 17th, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC)
yeah...you just gave me the story line..Yunho finds Yoochun is getting some Jae on the side and leader-shii is not going to do his happy dance....
predatorkitten
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:50 pm (UTC)
lolz i don't know if i should find it creepy that my mentioning Junsu-shi's brother inspired your evil genius or flattering that i influenced my unnie (great writer of yaoi). XD
onthethruway01
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
I must be tired...I read Yunho, not Junho
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 01:13 am (UTC)
you're my girlfriend.....lol!!!!

I'm afraid the hochun (forming in my brain) won't be as pleasant....gonna throw a switcheroo at you now....
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:34 am (UTC)
oh gosh, anything but a dolphin plushy...I will take the cookies though
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 02:24 pm (UTC)
Here little mouse, I've got some cheese...
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:48 am (UTC)
sigh..I had a really cool idea for the jaechun follow up too...ok, I won't make the Ho a meanie and no more raping the chun...gosh you guys are making me a softie now....maybe I'll just write a girlie poem instead...***throws glitter*****
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 02:26 pm (UTC)
Hey if you have time, I dedicated ( sort of) a post for you...
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 04:18 pm (UTC)
wait...I just realized you called Yoochun a sissy! Nobody calls my boyfriend um I mean the "Pimp" a sissy! Apologize to your Unnie! LOL!! just joking. Actually, "Crybaby" is a better description for Yoochun than sissy...someday he's going to cry so much, we'll have to build an ark....lmao!
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 08:30 pm (UTC)
buoyant and water tight...oh gosh, that came out wrong, didn't it?
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 10:06 pm (UTC)
yup, I bet Su's ass really is nice and tight...you know, you can stop me anytime....
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onthethruway01
Mar. 19th, 2009 01:34 pm (UTC)
poor Su...I really think he's still innocent or am I being naive on this one?
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onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 10:15 pm (UTC)
did you see my entry dedicated to you?
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 01:14 am (UTC)
at least Chunnie knows how to cuddle....
shepardlover
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:02 am (UTC)
I'm going to get you straightened out.
Irony. This piece of yaoi smut haz it. And I love it.

Another masterpiece!
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:39 am (UTC)
ty, ty, no applause, jsut throw money.....
shepardlover
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:42 am (UTC)
:(
Alas, the starving college student has no money to throw... lol.
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:42 am (UTC)
oops, I meant ... just throw money.....
onthethruway01
Mar. 18th, 2009 06:43 am (UTC)
join the club....
julili
Mar. 20th, 2009 10:52 pm (UTC)
well dayum
dayum dayum and dayum, I jizzed in my pants for sure.
I loved the dialogue, I felt it was a bit short in some parts, like some sentences felt short and a bit abrupt but other than that.... you have own the art of writing yaoi....
"Fucking, Su. We are going to practice fucking." <---- my brain kind of broke there...
onthethruway01
Mar. 20th, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
my mind snapped when I had Yoochun say

"fuck my pussy, Su. do it"

I'm your guurrfriend......LMFAO

Now we cuddle.....
julili
Mar. 21st, 2009 08:55 am (UTC)
yeah woman, that was oddly disturbing in a very hot way... just thinking about it makes me hot
onthethruway01
Mar. 21st, 2009 12:51 pm (UTC)
Hurray for man coochie!...yeah I need some Asian ass really bad...and I'm working on it...shhh...got a 23 year old Asian guy in NYC who wants me bad......
julili
Mar. 21st, 2009 12:53 pm (UTC)
nawwww what about hubby? make him cosplay instead of u going around for asian ass...
onthethruway01
Mar. 21st, 2009 12:59 pm (UTC)
hold on to your seat...the hubby shares me with other guys and vice versa
julili
Mar. 21st, 2009 01:06 pm (UTC)
you have a very good relationship!
onthethruway01
Mar. 21st, 2009 01:12 pm (UTC)
it's pretty cool....
missyoosu
Mar. 12th, 2012 09:44 pm (UTC)
Needs description.
onthethruway01
Apr. 16th, 2012 11:07 pm (UTC)
I did the description on this one
missyoosu
Apr. 17th, 2012 03:35 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'll add it to the fic list.
distorted_mapi
May. 21st, 2012 11:45 pm (UTC)
OMO is fantastic! Yoochun is so...needy XD
onthethruway01
May. 22nd, 2012 12:51 am (UTC)
lol
devjacaiora
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:57 pm (UTC)
feel bad for Chun... lol

he use his problem to get what he want and really tell Su how he feel but...

Junsu didn't catch it lol
onthethruway01
Sep. 19th, 2012 05:42 pm (UTC)
thanks for reading
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onthethruway01
Nov. 24th, 2012 12:46 am (UTC)
Hahahaha
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onthethruway01
Jul. 13th, 2013 04:31 pm (UTC)
thanks!
yoosuchun
Jan. 13th, 2015 08:15 pm (UTC)
JunChun smut way too awesome. Yes Chun, you are Su's girl. ;)
onthethruway01
Jan. 14th, 2015 01:31 am (UTC)
thanks for reading and feel free to read my other fics.
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